Thursday 23 April 2020

Writing WALHT - Acrostic

                            Acrostic                                                                                             
WALHT add detail
Success Criteria
Self Assessment
Use adjectives to describe

Use powerful words

Adjectives-Delicious, army, grey, dripping, painful, young and brave,battle, dark grey, orange, red and yellow, little
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Powerful words-War, Zooming, fighter, remember, death, corporation, yawning, popped up and pouring
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Anzac Day  Acrostic poem - Teacher's Poem
Anzac biscuits are delicious 
New Zealand soldiers at war  
Zooming fighter army planes in the grey sky 
Anzac day we remember them
Can never go back 
Death at war
A Lot of dripping blood and painful cuts 
Young soldiers were so brave 


ANZAC DAY - Arcangela's Poem
Australians
New Zealanders
Army in the battle field and dark grey clouds pouring
Corporation around the world
Dawn is orange, red and yellow
A little poppy flower popped up

Yawning after the Anzac parade

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2 comments:

  1. Sarah Aperahama24 April 2020 at 09:21

    Dear Angela,
    Excellent work Angela, I am really impressed with your self assessment here as well. You have used some really good verbs that add detail.
    Mrs Aperahama

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    1. Arcangela Liti25 April 2020 at 19:33

      Thanks Mrs A and the learning last week or the week about verbs really helped

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